Poem: “Line” (by Mary Margaret Park)
“Line”
by Mary Margaret Park
the wind
a blue streak intersecting
today and tomorrow
a hint
a suggestion
a notion
an exchange
between friends
a whispered echo
translucent
and bittersweet
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Posted: January 31st, 2012 under Uncategorized.
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Comment from mohan singh
Time February 4, 2012 at 11:51 pm
great poem and such a beautiful and informative words by mary margaret park i really love it.
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Comment from Jing
Time February 4, 2012 at 11:52 pm
I like this poem. It is easy to understand. The simple words give us an impressive and meaningful poem.
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Comment from A K Rao
Time February 5, 2012 at 12:08 am
A short and sweet poem with appropriate use of words! The expression of the poets views are impactful and thought provoking! Thanks!
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Comment from sahil
Time February 5, 2012 at 12:12 am
nice poem …good rhyme scheme used .. small and meaningful …
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Comment from Matt
Time February 5, 2012 at 12:15 am
I actually like short-lined poems. For me, it shows the brilliance of the poet since they can provoke the reader’s mind with just a few words.
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Comment from lalitha
Time February 5, 2012 at 12:23 am
very nice poem!with cute words. i like this poem very much ,i like it very much!
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Comment from Maite Channings
Time February 5, 2012 at 12:51 am
short yet interesting. I’d like this kind of poem because it can just capture our imagination.
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Comment from lili
Time February 5, 2012 at 1:06 am
The poem is easy to understand.It tells us life is beautiful.we should enjoy everything in nature.
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Comment from Bill
Time February 5, 2012 at 1:07 am
Good and informative poem. I love the wisdom words. Much appreciated.
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Comment from Bianki
Time February 5, 2012 at 1:26 am
It is a very simple poem but a very nice one! I love it.
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Comment from Jan Bruin
Time February 5, 2012 at 1:29 am
This is a poem when i read it the first time i thought about something different, but when i read it the second time it is going to be better and better. I hope there come more poems like this!
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Comment from Kelly
Time February 5, 2012 at 1:58 am
This is a beautiful poem written by Mary Margaret Park. A short and simple poem but very meaningful.
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Comment from Vidhyaprakash
Time February 5, 2012 at 2:29 am
Short and sweet poem with in depth meaning. I like the simple words in this poem. Good work
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Comment from Athena
Time February 5, 2012 at 2:32 am
This poem reminds me of a those little arguments that happen between two friends. Truly, the poem describes it all. Thank you for publishing it here.
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Comment from Tao Ym
Time February 5, 2012 at 2:32 am
Nice, short and let me have a little reflection. I like the end “bittersweet”
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Comment from Hari
Time February 5, 2012 at 2:43 am
its really “cool” . nice poet with a nice poem. I really appreciate. it though i am not a poet i am a lover of it. Its really an art. thanks MMP.
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Comment from zahied
Time February 5, 2012 at 2:56 am
This is awesome poem and sentence of poem excellent . great work by mary ..
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Comment from liuhua
Time February 5, 2012 at 6:16 pm
This poem tells us the mood has great influence on persons.Sometimes it makes people happy while it can make people sad.We should manage our moods to enjoy life.
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Comment from indu
Time February 4, 2012 at 11:43 pm
This is simple beauty. Very nice and thoughtful poem.
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