Mary Margaret Park

Comment from sjvg1976
Time February 5, 2012 at 7:16 pm

Indeed our emotions and mood are unpredictable they are sometimes high and sometimes they become so down and in a day only it fluctuate and that’s what we call life.

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Comment from Oliveth
Time February 5, 2012 at 7:16 pm

You have a real gift of writing poems. I am looking forward to read more.

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Comment from albert arroceros
Time February 5, 2012 at 7:20 pm

This poem reminds me on how our mood affects our days, its like when you have a bad day and you feel grumpy and you accidentally yell to your kids. Bad moods just ruins things

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Comment from Matt
Time February 5, 2012 at 7:34 pm

I like how you had really drew a picture of what moods are. Your choice of words were great.

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Comment from Jing
Time February 5, 2012 at 8:00 pm

This poem describes that our moods are very complicated. Sometimes we are up but sometiems we are down.

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Comment from Vidhyaprakash
Time February 5, 2012 at 8:13 pm

The poem is very short and sweet. I like the simple words and depth meaning of this poem

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Comment from Bianki
Time February 5, 2012 at 9:19 pm

You are really good in poem writing. Very nice one!

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Comment from Jenny Fina
Time February 5, 2012 at 10:36 pm

Emotions are indeed the most complicated thing of being a human. Most of the time it affects our way of thinking and often times than not we make the wrong decision.
the second paragraph reminds me about my father who always tells me that if you are emotionally high sit down, take a deep breath think of nothing but the word calm down, he always say “don’t let your emotion create a hurricane”. I guess he is right.
I am quite guilty with the mood thing though, hehe! it can go as high as it gets and sometimes just because we are caught off guard we often times drop like a plane out of control and the worst thing is that we often drag people out “colateral damage sometimes”.
nice piece I like the way you use the words, romantic in structure that talks about real human emotion.
I’ll keep reading

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Comment from april
Time February 5, 2012 at 10:46 pm

nice poem, yes, our moods sometimes can be likened to many things.
the most important thing, i think, is try to keep a high spirit, and don’t let the bad mood control our happiness for too long time.

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Comment from saso
Time February 5, 2012 at 11:15 pm

This poem was beautiful,how ever wrote it showed real talent,It was great.

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Comment from Bill
Time February 6, 2012 at 12:06 am

Very good poem. It has touched my heart.

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Comment from Manu Chhabra
Time February 6, 2012 at 12:18 am

Quite a thoughtful and meaningful piece of writing! There has been a very good use of metaphors. We all can relate to the mood swings expressed in this poem.

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Comment from Mary Grace
Time February 6, 2012 at 12:38 am

The poem shows that moods are very hard to manage. It gives a bad impression if we are on a bad mood. Nice job!

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Comment from indu
Time February 6, 2012 at 1:06 am

It is not possible to predict our mood, it is always on a swing. The poem is a real beauty , full of emotions. Great work.

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Comment from ucha14
Time February 6, 2012 at 1:41 am

i like liryk of the song. it’s very great. but i want to hear the song. because i have no hear.

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Comment from Audrey V.
Time February 6, 2012 at 4:10 pm

“Moods” captures well the emotion attached to this state of being; its rhyme and flow are well timed. Being a bit old school, I do find the lack of punctuation and capitalization unpolished and distracting; but the heart of its essence beats through in resounding clarity. I rather like it, I do.

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